This was a story I wrote for a competition . Here were the rules:
*A piano
*The color orange
*[this dialogue] ”But George was trying to stick a pickle in my ear!”
*[this sentence] Never before had __name of character__ ever seen a teddy bear that talked to itself.
*A missing sock
*A pair of glasses that somehow become the key to the whole story
It can be a mystery, it can be a romance, it can be an action-adventure, it can be a science fiction, it can be a christian story, it can be whatever! It has to be from five to ten pages on a computer document, done in the time period of two weeks.
Here is the story:
Plunk, plunk, plunk, the
keys on the piano went, as the skillful musician played them faster
and faster. The musician was a little girl, wearing a pink top, blue
jeans and a red flower in her hair. Suddenly the little hands
faltered and the melody stopped. She sighed, another
mistake.
“Your
rushing it, Olivia.”
Came a
somewhat stern voice from behind her. The owner of the voice was a
man. Tall, wearing a suit which made him look even taller. He stood
from the his chair and walk over to the piano.
“I
told you just yesterday that you have to play the pauses. Didn't you
practice them?” he asked. Olivia rolled her eyes.
“I
was trying to, but when I was, George was trying to stick a pickle in
my ear, Mr. Jacobs!”
“George?”
“George
is my little brother. I don't like pickles and he was trying to make
me eat one.” Mr. Jacobs tried to hide a smile as he waved the
subject off.
“I
understand. Now, about your pauses, I also think its your posture.
Your leaning to close to the piano. Sit back a bit.”
“Okay,
I'll try.” A chilled wind blew in from opened window, reminding
Olivia of how nice the day was outside...
“One,
two, three! One, two, three!” said Mr. Jacobs, waving his hand
violently.
Olivia
brushed a wisp of her blond hair from her face then began again. The
intro first, then the main bit, as the higher and lower keys were hit
lightly with her fingers. Mr. Jacobs closed the windows and shut the
white curtains.
“Good!
That's much better.” he said, sitting down beside her again.
The
sheet on the piano top started showing more and more faster notes and
less slow ones. She seemed to be getting, but she leaned in and...
She
stumbled over the keys as a the door bell ringed, next to the window.
Patting her shoulder, her teacher smiled and nodded.
“That
will be your mother. Best put your books away now.”
Olivia
seemed disappointed that her notes were not perfect, but she picked
up her three books anyway as Mr. Jacobs opened the door. Olivia's
mom, Angela stood there. She was wearing a blue shirt and jeans
skirt, with lipstick that was as red as ever.
“Good
day, Mr. Jacobs.”
“And
to you.” he replied.
“Is
Olivia ready?” Olivia walked to the door, and nodded.
“I'm
ready.”
“Good!”
Angela said. “We're going shopping today for a new pair of shoes
for miss Livy.” Mr. Jacobs smiled.
“Oh,
that’s nice.”
Olivia looked up at him.
“I'm
going to wear them for the piano competition.” she said proudly.
“Good.
You need good shoes for that.” he answered.
“Come
on Olivia. We have to get moving if we want to get them today.”
“Okay.
Bye Mr. Jacobs.”
“Bye.”
Angela
and Olivia walked to the car, a old orange Chevy. They got in. Olivia
buckled herself in one of the back seats as her mom put the key into
the ignition. Pulling out of the drive way, she set a southerly
course towards a line of stores.
“So,
how did your lessons go, Livy?” Her mom always called her Livy.
“Okay.
I kept missing up the pauses when I'm going really fast. Mr. Jacobs
said I was leaning to close to the piano. But its hard to see the
notes when I'm sitting back.” Angela fished around in her pocket
then drew out her glasses. Putting them on, she looked back at
Olivia.
“Really?
Its hard for you to see?”
“Yeah,
and I mess up because of it.”
Angela
pursed her lips. “Maybe I should look in to getting you some
glasses.”
“Do
you think we could get the glasses before the competition?”
“Don't
worry. You still have a whole week until the competition.”
The
little girl smiled.
“I
hope we can get them by then.”
Angela
drove into the car lot and parked in front of a store called The Kids
Corner. They got out, Olivia leaving her books in the car. She
had learned the hard way what happens if you leave something at the
store. You don't get it back. Running up to the display window, she
looked inside. There stood, or rather I should say walked, a teddy
bear! Red bow tie, ferry brown body, the whole nine yards. Olivia
began pointing at it and beckoning her mother with her other hand.
“Mommy,
look!” Angela had her nose in her purse, apparently trying to count
her dollar bills. Olivia grabbed her mom's arm and pulled her over to
the window.
“See,
mom?” Angela looked up just in time to see her daughter run into
the store.
“Slow
down! Oh, Livy...” Livy stood in front of the display, inside. She
heard her mom come in because she tripped on the door mat. The bear
began to talk.
“What
a lovely day!” Pause, then it spoke again.
“Yes,
it is.” Never before had Olivia seen a teddy bear that talked to
itself. Let a lone one that walked! Angela was beside her now.
“Pretty
cool.” she commented in the way mothers do.
On the
table, beside the teddy bear, several posters were stacked on it.
Olivia picked one up and read it.
“Animal
robot building competition. Build a robot inspired by a animal. Ages
eight to twelve. Entry fee, fifty dollars. First prize will be a
hundred dollars. Don't you see mom?” Olivia said. “We need to pay
the entry fee for Georges birthday! You know how much he likes
building electric things.” Angela made a grim face.
“Yes.
I should know because he took apart my coffee machine and made a soap
dispenser out of it.” Olivia looked up at her.
“You
know his birthday is in six days and this is only fifty dollars to
enter.”
“Only?”
asked Angela. “Honey, I have to use those fifty dollars for
clothes this month. That is, unless you win your music contest then
you can donate your prize money for that.”
Olivia
made a face. Angela started walking towards the shoes corner.
“We'll
buy something nice for him.” she assured her.
Olivia
stuffed the poster in her jean pocket then followed her. Angela
picked out a box that had a picture of little black, shiny shoes.
Taking the lid of, she showed her them.
“How
about these?” Olivia's little blue eyes grew wide.
“Oh,
mom!” She took them out of the box.
“Try
them on and see if they fit.” Angela said. Putting them on, Olivia
said,
“They
fit perfectly!”
“Walk
around in them.” Olivia skipped around in them a while then came
back.
“I
like them, mom!” Angela smiled at her.
“Are
you sure that you don't want to try any of the other ones?” She
said, pointing to the other boxes. Olivia shook her head.
“No,
I like these.”
“Well,
then. That was the easiest shoe shopping trip I have ever had. Come
on, then.”
They
went through the cash register quickly then walked down the side walk
to Walmart. Ushering Olivia
passed the toys, Angela went to the 'Glasses place' as Livy called
it. The person working there, a older lady with bright blue eyes gave
Olivia a check up, doing all the things a eye doctor does. The little
girl had a hard time sitting still long enough but finally the lady
gave her diagnosis.
“It appears that she is near sighted.” she said.
“Do you suggest glasses for her, Ms. Canden?” asked Angela.
“Please call me Gen.” said Gen, taking her glasses off. “Yes,
I think you should. It would help her.” Olivia looked from one to
the other.
“Will it help when I play piano, mom?”
Angela seemed distracted, trying to think.
“Maybe, honey. Um, Gen, how long would it take to get the
glasses?” Gen smiled.
“I could get you get you an appointment for Friday. Were kinda
busy so it will take a little longer then normal.” Angela thought
about it for a minute.
“That's the day your contest is on, Livy.” Turning to Gen, she
asked another question.
“Would I be able to have the appointment at five thirty?”
Looking at a schedule, Gen answered.
“Yes. That time is open for you to pick them up.”
“Great.” Gen looked around in her desk until she found a chart
that had different color choices on it.
“Here Olivia,” she said. “What color do you want your glasses
to be?” Olivia looked at them for a while then pointed to a dark
pink color.
“That one.” she said decisively.
“What do you say?” asked Angela.
“Thank you!”
The lady smiled.
“You're welcome.”
Back at home, Olivia shook off her shoes at the door. Music books in
hands, she closed the big, wooden door to there house. She walked
into the living room where there piano was placed. Sliding on to the
seat, she set her books on the piano top.
“Hi, Olivia.” said a voice behind her. She turned around to see
her younger brother, George, coming into the room.
“George, I saw the coolest thing today while me and mom were
shopping.” He sat down on one of the couches, his brown hair
un-brushed as usual. He raised an eye brow.
“What was it?” he asked. She leaned closer.
“I saw a teddy bear that walked by itself. And it also talked! It
was a advertizement for a robot competition.” Olivia fished around
in her pocket then gave him the poster. George read it.
“I wish I could enter. Why do they have entry fees anyway?”
“So they can make money out of it. I asked mom to pay the entry
fee for your birthday but she said we don't have enough money.”
There family was not rich in any sense of the word and the children
were often denied certain wants.
“Yeah. Did your piano listens go good?” he said, changing the
subject. As if remembering something, she said
“Oh, yeah! I was having trouble reading the notes so mom took me
to get some glasses. I will get them on Friday.”
“That's cool.” he said. Olivia felt a pang of sympathy for
him. She was getting glasses so that fixed her problem but he could
not fix his. He did not get enough money to enter.
“Well,” She said. “Maybe, that is if I win the music
competition, I could give some of the money to you for the robot
thing.” He seemed to brighten up.
“Maybe. But I have to practice if I want to win.” she said in a
older sister tone of voice.
“Okay!” George agreed. “I'll go work on my remote controller
while you practice.”
“Remember
I said maybe.” He
nodded then left the room. She turned back to her music.
I
should give him the money. She
thought. But I have been working so hard at this song!
She opened her book to the third page. Settling her hands on the
black and white keys she began to practice.
Five days later...
Olivia (wearing her dark pink glasses) sat in her chair beside her
mom and dad. She was also wearing her new black shoes. She had almost
forgotten her socks because she was so excited. George was on her
left and Mr. Jacobs was on her right. She squirmed with excitement.
This was her first performance in front of more then her family and
teacher. A man walked up onto the big, wooden stage. A mike was in
his hand.
“Good evening lady's and gentlemen!” He said with a smile on his
face. The room became quiet. “I would like to thank you all for
coming to our annual Home School Piano Competition, or as you may
also know it: The HSPC.” He went on to explain the rules and
prizes, of which Olivia only heard, “First prize will be a hundred
and fifty dollars!” She glanced over at George but he did not see
it. First went the oldest, then the middle then the youngest.
Finally, after what seemed a age, she heard her name called.
“Olivia Davis will be our last but certainly not the least,
contestant.”
Her hands were trembling as she walked up the steps to the stage.
Every eye was on her. Sitting down at the piano, she glanced at her
mom and dad. They smiled at her and that gave her enough courage to
start. First the intro, building up momentum as she launched into the
song's core. It was a melancholy song, but Olivia felt very happy.
All too soon the song came to an end. She bowed and the audience
clapped then she went back to her seat, as the guy with the mike came
back on stage.
“Well don't we have some talented young people, parents!” All
the parents clapped enthusiastically.
“Now the judges have decided and we will announce the winners.”
He consulted a list.
“In third place is Justin Crone!” Clapping.
“In second Place is Beth Swonsin!” More clapping. He looked up
from the paper then said.
“And the first place winner for this year's HSPC...” Olivia held
her breath.
“Olivia Davis!” More and more clapping!
“Get up there, Olivia!” said Mr. Jacobs. She walked up to the
stage again. The man gave her a bouquet of flowers.
“Congratulation!”
And, of course, the next day George turned nine and for his birthday
Olivia gave him the fifty dollars. He entered the competition, but as
often happens in life, he did not when first prize but third. The
prize for that was twenty dollars and he used the money to go get ice
cream with his sister and family.
Things could have turned out differently, I suppose. But they
didn't.
I know some of this is misspelled... Sorry... lol :) But I love it!
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